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terror, assault, anthrax

beitrag von: schorsch

new roses

They held the gun up to his head
he had to paint
was not afraid

they held the knife up on his fillet
he had to sing
to love 
to dream

but could not sleep
not think
not give
there was a hurt
a thing that screamed....
cause they reflexed hid mind all day and night
in awful way


they were so silent
with a smile
they gave him snaps
and hoped he dies

the gun was often up his head
he couldnt feel it anymore
he screamed while dreaming in his bed
and hoped that he had closed the door

the Friend, he took the knife again
and said ok, you will feel pain

the neighbour sayed i take the truck
and roll about your daughters neck

they talked about killing his son
and in a wheek the painter's gone
sorry...


review von: ilija trojanow

könnte zu einer ballade werden... was meinen Sie?

herzlich, i.t.

Georg Hager sagt
06.04.2014 20:51
aus dem Leben gegriffen. Doch die Ballade soll heller werden. Der Trobador vielleicht auch
Georg Hager sagt
06.04.2014 20:54
Wildwest ballade vielleicht
ilija trojanow sagt
07.04.2014 19:38
ja, warum nicht :-))
herzlich, i.t.