The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone - auf eine bessere tierwelt
clemens setz (aut)
The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone
beitrag von: Sylvia
The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone
The use-by date now long passed
That's why Phoenix meat's made to last
So old, after all
Twas on sale in the Mall
Strip the meat from the bones faster than fast
Then you fly on its wishbone, fly high or bust!
review von: clemens j. setz
Inspiring! I just thought of an alternative last line - not meant as a correction of the original, just as a version inspired by your lines:
The use-by date now long passed
That's why Phoenix meat's made to last
So old, after all
Twas on sale in the Mall
on the outskirts of Irkutsk Oblast
(Don't know why that came into my mind.)
kommentare
Isabel Pirsic
07.10.2021 18:32
label says: do not roast over open fire
I’d hope phoenix doesn‘t dully „taste like chicken“
Sylvia Petter
08.10.2021 17:16
It's the wishbone that's important. So you can fly off on it ;)
Sylvia Petter
08.10.2021 17:18
I like that!
on the outskirts of Irkutsk Oblast
Of course. Where else would one find phoenix for sale? Thank you. It was tough finding a good rhyme.
label says: do not roast over open fire
I’d hope phoenix doesn‘t dully „taste like chicken“