clemens j. setz
The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone - auf eine bessere tierwelt

clemens setz (aut) The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone

beitrag von: Sylvia

The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone

The use-by date now long passed
That's why Phoenix meat's made to last

So old, after all
Twas on sale in the Mall

Strip the meat from the bones faster than fast
Then you fly on its wishbone, fly high or bust!

review von: clemens j. setz

Inspiring! I just thought of an alternative last line - not meant as a correction of the original, just as a version inspired by your lines: 

The use-by date now long passed
That's why Phoenix meat's made to last

So old, after all
Twas on sale in the Mall

on the outskirts of Irkutsk Oblast  


(Don't know why that came into my mind.)

kommentare

Isabel Pirsic
07.10.2021 18:32

label says: do not roast over open fire

I’d hope phoenix doesn‘t dully „taste like chicken“

Sylvia Petter
08.10.2021 17:16

It's the wishbone that's important. So you can fly off on it ;)

Sylvia Petter
08.10.2021 17:18

I like that!

on the outskirts of Irkutsk Oblast

Of course. Where else would one find phoenix for sale? Thank you. It was tough finding a good rhyme.

Isabel Pirsic
09.10.2021 14:08

indeed, the жар-птица !

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