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beitrag von: Sylvia

Presque haiku for peace

Every child knows
No man is an island
Yet nations pretend.

review von: clemens j. setz

Or maybe "insist" instead of "pretend"?
Isabel Pirsic sagt
07.10.2021 18:27
very nice:
child-man / island-nations
knowing/being/pretending
last line:
I‘d suggest „still“ in place of „yet“
Sylvia Petter sagt
08.10.2021 17:20
Thanks you. But they always have pretended and today they insist and we see the result.
Sylvia Petter sagt
08.10.2021 17:20
Yes. But I feel they always have pretended. Now they are digging their heels in, and we see the result.