beitrag von: Sylvia
Presque haiku for peace
Every child knows No man is an island Yet nations pretend.
clemens setz (aut) Presque haiku for peace
review von: clemens j. setz
Or maybe "insist" instead of "pretend"?
kommentare
Thanks you. But they always have pretended and today they insist and we see the result.
Yes. But I feel they always have pretended. Now they are digging their heels in, and we see the result.
Kommentare wurden abgeschaltet.
very nice:
child-man / island-nations
knowing/being/pretending
last line:
I‘d suggest „still“ in place of „yet“